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Sonnet: Wine Seaside and Love and You
Perhaps a honeymoon, you and me, two
flutes and a bottle of wine. Beachfront, we
dance through this rented bungalow, the sea
swooshing, tide thrumming, moon smiling on true
love as we dance and kiss and toast our true
marriage. Hold this dream. In time, we will see
it to fruition, though it seems to be
merely a dream in these long days. We do
all we can, bide our time and struggle day
upon day to overcome hurdles high
as the surf, deep as the tide, blue as bay
pools and evening sky . . . Never question why,
but push on, trusting we will find someday
on a beach under full moon and clear sky.
David M Pitchford
10 June 2008
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Comment by David M Pitchford on August 19, 2008 at 2:57pm -
Thanks. I haven't seen the ocean in . . . a bunch of years. But I feel it still in my heart, mind, and soul.
I was very much trying to create a visceral experience with this poem, one that touched on the majority of senses.
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Comment by Tracey on August 19, 2008 at 1:35pm -
David,
I loved this sonnet of "Wine Seaside.." I like that you paint a picture that thru your words you can see and feel. I especially like the lines" hurdles high as the surf, deep as the tide, blue as bay pools and evening sky..." I just loved that. Tracey
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